Mx. Paige Ashlynn<p>I released a small Twine game, <a href="https://mxashlynn.itch.io/passing-autumn" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">the Passing of Autumn</a>, an adaptation of a short story I wrote 20 years ago, and this is the feedback I've gotten so far:</p><p>➕ evocative description<br>➕ interesting setting<br>➕ well adapted to interactivity<br>➖ too long<br>➖ too repetitive if you want to replay<br>➖ not enough background on the dyad</p><p>I will keep these in mind for the future!</p><p><a href="https://peoplemaking.games/tags/QueerGames" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>QueerGames</span></a> <a href="https://peoplemaking.games/tags/TransGames" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>TransGames</span></a> <a href="https://peoplemaking.games/tags/NarrativeGames" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>NarrativeGames</span></a> <a href="https://peoplemaking.games/tags/Twine" class="mention hashtag" rel="nofollow noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">#<span>Twine</span></a></p>